If you weren't there

If you weren't there

A Poem by It's Me, The Miracle
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A poem on love and intimacy

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I could have gone by now,
if you weren't there to wait for me

I could have blinded my eyes,
if you weren't there to be seen

I could have ceased speaking,
if you weren't there to listen

I could have stopped hearing,
if you weren't there to speak

I could have given up dreaming,
if you weren't there to be dreamed

I could have cut my tongue,
if you weren't there to make me taste

I could have ended thinking,
if you weren't there to be perceived

I could have refused sensing,
if you weren't there to be touched

I could have forgotten everything,
if you weren't there to remind

I could have been in curse,
if you weren't there to bless

I could have held imagining,
if you weren't there to inspire

I could have looked the ugliest,
if you weren't there to arose beauty

I could have been poor,
if you weren't there to make me rich

I could have been weak,
if you weren't there to make me strong

I could have been in want,
if you weren't to provide

I could have been dead,
if you weren't there to live for me



© 2013 It's Me, The Miracle



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Beautifully penned love poem and the repetitive second line of the couplets it very effective. I like! ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's Me, The Miracle

2 Years Ago

Thank you So much for the review Miss Sharon
A beautiful love poem. I like the repetitive structure and the build-up of emotion.

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend
Wow! this is lovely, I truly enjoyed this piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend
Wonderful piece of rhythm and art...I like it very much

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend
This is the greatest example of love I have ever read. I always tell my husband we are a reflection of each other; and I definitely feel that you portrayed that in this poem beautifully!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thank you Lee, .....Thanks a lot for these encouraging words....I guess we share a lit wave, that ha.. read more
This is actually quite brilliant. Love the romance.. I may have to borrow the picture you used.. love it. shallimarRose

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend...Picture!! of course with pleasure....In fact it doesn't belong to me...Co.. read more
shallimarRose

4 Years Ago

lol ok then... xo
A very nice and romantic poem. I like the repetition in some lines...Bravo

Posted 4 Years Ago


You've done an amazing job with this poem.. a breathtaking portrayal of true love... i really like the use of repetition :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing this poem.....Rhythm is the twin of a poem....that's why trie.. read more
quite unique in a way...A wonderful love poem....should not the 9th verse read FORGOTTEN everything though?

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Hi....Thanks for the review....you are right....There must be the past participle....Thanks a lot fo.. read more
Amazing piece, my friend...
Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for reviewing my work dear Kejara. Hopefully, I can have a look at your's soon

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Added on August 8, 2013
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