Separation

A poem on the separation of a couple into individuals..They forgot that goal of a couple differs from Individuals

Her desire was to reach the sun

His desire was to reach the moon

 

Though, love brought them together

Their goals never did love each other

 

She wanted sun who reigned the day

He wished moon who reigned the night

 

She wished light that lightens beauty

He wished light that lightens reality

 

Though days were hot, she loved it

Though nights were dark, he loved it

 

With goals being opposed each other

They decided to keep apart from other

 

With him, she will never find her goal

With her, he will never find his goal

 

Though loved him very much, she left

Though loved her very much, he left

 

She walked to the sun to see the beauty

He walked to the moon to see the reality

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Dear Friends, Thanks a lot for spending time to read and review my poem. God Bless you

Reviews

[Mereena]

It is very particular....It may not happen all the time

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear friend

[Suja]

so sad to read this poem....I love it very much

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear friend

[koty bell]

Ur poem shows that not all opposites attract... This was a wonderful poem thx for sharing:)

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot for the review dear koty

[koty bell]

No prob.. Thx fot the great poem:)

[Riding the Rainbow]

very particular but sometimes it's true..

[It's Me, The Miracle]

Thanks a lot dear Kejara....How are you? How about your PhD

[Riding the Rainbow]

not feeling very well but it's a normal thing in my life..how r u?