The Tail-end

The Tail-end

A Poem by It's Me, The Miracle
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Self realization of a complete woman !

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A better half is the half of a couple
The half with a lot of flaws!!
So do, I became the tail-end of us

Being the tail-end, I forgot how to see
As the head is there to see for me,
he hid my flaw to make me see

Being the tail-end, I forgot how to hear
As the head is there to hear for me,
he hid my flaw to make me hear

Being the tail-end, I forgot how to speak
As the head is there to speak for me,
he hid my flaw to make my voice heard

Being the tail-end, I forgot how to walk
As the head is there to move for me,
he hid my flaw to walk alone in the world

You hid all my weakness to make me better
Called me the better half, though I wasn't
Making it a pleasure being the tail-end

© 2013 It's Me, The Miracle



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It's Me, The Miracle
Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. It is the flow of an emotion, when I realized myself.... Thank you

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really good piece, my friend;)

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend
Well done poetess, and I refer to mine as the better half as well, and knowing what I know about my wife; I can only assume your really are the better half!

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear J.....Your words are like Boost mixed with sweet milk....
Wife explained in another words

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot mereena
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Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot suja
Wonderful piece for sure! Truly and understandably of two different cultures but a woman should be at equal heads of who we are. For they even as a tail-end must know they have a heart and a wonderful head of thoughts that shine so brightly when we are with them. It is mixed with great emotion for sure and you never write it off as it is completely read in the lines so clearly Beautiful piece, nevertheless. Thank you very much mam :) Have a beautiful rest of your day :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Emmanuel.....Your review is very much constructive.....Thanks a lot
Good poem, the words really seem to flow and i love how the title ties into the theme

Posted 4 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend

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Added on August 28, 2013
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