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I won’t let you fancy my loss

I won’t let you fancy my loss

A Poem by It's Me, The Miracle
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Its a poem about my hope for life...How hope plays its role to shift the curse of life to a beautiful boon.

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Hope being the impulse of my day,


I let my dreams, pursue for success


I may appear as if I am in struggle


Yet, I won’t let you fancy my loss


Sailing in the drowning dark ship 


I placed hope as the light of my jaunt


Though, weakness being the routine


I determined to stand grand and tall


At the verge of me losing my hope


I made up my mind to smile


Effacing my bid to shed tears


I nailed smile as the norm of my lips


 Choosing hope as the first thought 


I altered my fate from death to life


Whilst, death the instance of the day 


I shifted its curse with life, the boon


Having hope as the gift of the day,


I kept my dreams rear and result


Hope being the impulse of my day,


I let my dreams, pursue for success


Though I appear as if in struggle


I won’t let you fancy my loss



© 2015 It's Me, The Miracle



Author's Note

It's Me, The Miracle
Thanks a lot for spending time on my words...

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What an awesome and poignant write Miracle! I love the way you came full circle to repeat the opening lines of the write. That is, to me, always an effective closure. ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


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It's Me, The Miracle

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Miss Sharon
A very spiritual poem about hope. Ideas are crisp and clean, and the flow is just wonderful. Thanks for sharing such a well written piece and have a great day.

Posted 2 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

2 Years Ago

Thank you So much Jen Walters for getting the crux out of my lines
Jen Walters

2 Years Ago

You're quite welcome, it was easy to do in this piece. Please feel free to browse some of my poetry.. read more
It's Me, The Miracle

2 Years Ago

It's my pleasure. Thank you
A hope-filled and with good defiance in the face of loss and calamities. Stand tall and strong. Bravo...
An excellent poem. .....:)......

Posted 2 Years Ago


It's Me, The Miracle

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the encouragement
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly......:)......

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Added on August 2, 2015
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Tags: Hope, boon, love, light