Newton's Third

Newton's Third

A Poem by J. K. Beach
"

Inspired by Kelly's "Superman"

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I feel nothing

I am

 

untethered

 

Until

fingertips touch

soft fabric

hand tingles

neurons fire

in iridescent fractal mindscapes

 

We clear the closing car door and

my hand finds

the small of your back

           

I center myself in your universe"


hitch my star to your galaxy

and let Newton’s third symphony

dance us on up along

the sidewalk

 


© 2016 J. K. Beach



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I could re-post the entire poem here as my favorite line(s)...but I am, as you must know, partial to the third stanza.

This is so romantic, Jeff, so incredibly cool. I never would have thought something like "Newton's third symphony" would rock my world the way this does! Much applause, my friend!

Kelly
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Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. K. Beach

1 Year Ago

Well the hand on my back line in your "Superman" piece got me started... sorta thought about it from.. read more



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hitch my star to your galaxy. how nice thanks for the piece.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Your writing is always a pleasure to read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


I could re-post the entire poem here as my favorite line(s)...but I am, as you must know, partial to the third stanza.

This is so romantic, Jeff, so incredibly cool. I never would have thought something like "Newton's third symphony" would rock my world the way this does! Much applause, my friend!

Kelly
x

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. K. Beach

1 Year Ago

Well the hand on my back line in your "Superman" piece got me started... sorta thought about it from.. read more
Unseen forces at work. Clever, original and thoughtful. The last two stanzas particularly speak volumes to me.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. K. Beach

1 Year Ago

Thanks, my new friend!
wow, the chemistry ignited by the slightest touch...this poem is my kind of sexy...it is that subtle movement, that subtle glance, slightest touch...and boom...for every action, there is reaction.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. K. Beach

1 Year Ago

Thank you much, Jacob!

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J. K. Beach

Charlotte, NC



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