When will everything be alright?

about him

As you kiss me, i taste her lipstick on your newly pink lips.
I seen her on you, all i hear is your lies
I hug you tightly and i can smell her strong perfume
why? i assumed you would be true
every girl in the city knows you
you cant stay here by my side
you didn't know i would of died for you?
i am dying here because i cant say what i want to
so i pack my backs and head out the door
as you lie like a stone, on the sofa
my heart exploded with my bags in my hand
no words where ever said
when i walked away
you didn't even stop me
i guess im better off alone.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems.

Reviews

[Proletariat Uprising]

I want to punch that dude in the face. Which means that you've sucked me into the poem, and I became one with the emotions, tensions, and feelings in the poem. That's the sign of a great writer, the ability to do such a thing to her readers. And hey, who needs proper grammar when your publishing company could hire a proofreader? Yes, I'm saying you have the talent to be published.

[SimplyOlivia]

i know exactly what this is like. and better off alone? not so much. just better off without him

[bwmorency]

Ah,is this a cheating poem? Again, the issue with spelling and randomness as well. You'll get better.