Crying my broken heart out

One minute he told me he loved me, then the next day he left me alone

How?
Why?
How and why did you leave me all off a sudden?
Us
Kissing
Us kissing in my back yard, with neighbors watching, us not caring about anything but our love
Heart
Heating
My heart and your heart was beating and heating up with passion
One
Stupid
One night when we got crazy you didn't like the way I said I really liked you more than a friend
Me
Crying
You left because you didn't want to face me. Now my broken heart is empty without you
3
words
I love you. You used to whispered you loved me, but when i said it to you, you drove away
Empty
Soul
You said it was your last goodbye, my whole soul is empty when you left to be with your guy friends
Lost
Love
Lost love, i wish that i could turn back the hands of time, to never even be your friend
Tired
Following
Tired of you saying you wanted and needed me, then spitting me out
Wishing
Dieing
I really just wish i would die right now, no one would care
Care
Nights
All those nights, months waiting for you to really care about me
Complication
Tonight
Tonight you complicated me, you through me up against the wall
Smoking
Weed
We were weed and buddies who screwed
Fun
Heart
When I was with you, my heart was having fun
Lonely
No one
I have no one, I am very lonely
Now
Cut
Now I'm just gonna cut my wrist, and hope to die
Issues
Sadness
I am painfully wishing to end my life with all my complicated issues
You
Medication
You were my mediation, you took away my pain
Me
You
Me and you where so good together, why couldn't you really see that through your stoned eyes?
Sensations
Fake
I'm just gonna be my delusional self and make believe I still have you in my arms
Weed
Fun
I thought weed was supposed to help us have fun
Screwed
Life
My life is so screwed up without you, you rescued me and were my light. Now the lights out.
First
Love
I thought you were gonna be my first one to go all the way
Left
Brokenly
You drove away and left me crying my painful heart out. Please someone kill me I can not live without you.

Reviews

[Gypsy]

I like the way you wrote this piece, very unique and creative! It shows a lot of passion and emotions evoked in this poem. The only thing is that I would add more about how it felt in the end when he left her, that might make this piece more powerful. This really is a great poem though, you should really keep writing! :)

[Jeff]

Personal and painful.

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[Matthew Kult]

Well I will say you ever want to smoke with me you are more than welcome. Very personal, and I hope this help relieve some of the pain. Great write.

Regards,

Matthew

[Jordan]

Very self-evident.