Beautiful way

Have any thoughts?

Life is a rollercoaster fulfilled with emotions
Every day there is always another problem
Every night there is always an extra tear
Want to be going towards the right path
Going crazy, hearing the clock tick away the useless minutes
I am going to start to try not to let stupid things nor people get me down
I am tired of always having a frown inside me
There’s definitely a screw loose in my mind
But at this point in my life
I'm trying not to care anymore
Life and love hurts when you care too much
I'm just rolling with the flow on everything
No more complex ways
I have to try to thinking more positively on different things
In my life I am suppose to be happy!  

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

I can really relate to your poem here. This sure seems to be how life is and the struggle to keep moving forward, trying not to let all the hard things, painful and sad things to drag us down. Focus more on the good things and doing that can be a struggle too. This is outstanding!

[Amit Parmessur]

Good one:

Every night there is always an extra tear

as the best line :)

Regards.

[Daydreamer54]

Yehah, it's true life is full of surprsies and some are unpleasent, but the best thing to do is not worry about stuff u can't change because all ur doing is wasting your time. Life's to shrt too worry about useless things.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A wonderful relatable poem here, love the 'screw lose' phrase makes the poem so real:)

[patricia]

Thankyou this was good, sometimes we are our own worst enemies. Like you say letting people affect us. I loved ...I'm just rolling with the flow on everything. You write well.

[An owl on the moon]

You do share so powerfully the unique ups and downs of life.. the living and the joy that should be.. the often dark and anxious things that take over... Yes.. you should be happy.. Get you a ticket for that ride!

[JCP]

Nice short poem about moving on, and getting over the general nuances of life.

[Tate Morgan]

Ash this was so sad is life that way to you

[Myenigma]

life and love hurt, but its not about not caring about them but about stupid things and unwilling/hateful people

"Life is a rollercoaster" I was gonna use that line!! You beat me to it!! Now i gotta use slide which isn't that much fun.... :P

[thoughts of jade]

this is a poem i can really relate to