The Pain from my Heart

Describes how i am currently feeling.

My soul is collapsing
Dwindling away
Incomplete
My Heart feels like its missing something that used to fill it.


My soul is shattering
from the pain of my loss
My heart is breaking
cause i don't know if she's gone.

My love is from the heart, increasing more and more
even when it hurts, i love her more and more.

Reviews

[Liz-z]

Aw, so cute! Wonderful writing, with such an amazing yet painful feeling! Bravo, bravo!
Favorite lines:
"My soul is collapsing"
I found that line to be a very eye catching first line.
"Even when it hurts, I love her more and more."
Such as sweet and meaningful line! :)

[OneLostOneFound]

wow. :)