A Poem by james l navas

Left, Right, Left, Right, Left,
Up the hill.
through the valley.
into the forest
through the river
out, of the forest. 

 Right Left Right Left Right.
Down the hill, into
the meadow
through the stream
out of the meadow. 

Left, Right, Left, Right, Left. 
Around the hill. through, 
the village,
into the park,
over the pond. 
Out of the park. 

© 2016 james l navas

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"out of the forest", "out of the meadow", "out of the park". but god, i wish i never had to leave. love the simplicity.

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james l navas

1 Year Ago

thanks it means a lot

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Added on October 24, 2016
Last Updated on October 24, 2016
Tags: hike, hiking, walk, walking, outdoors, camping, poetry, nature, trekking, woodland, wildlife


james l navas
james l navas

sheffield, United Kingdom

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