Hike

Hike

A Poem by james l navas

Left, Right, Left, Right, Left,
Struggle:
Up the hill.
through the valley.
into the forest
through the river
out, of the forest. 

Stride;
 Right Left Right Left Right.
Down the hill, into
the meadow
through the stream
out of the meadow. 

Left, Right, Left, Right, Left. 
Amble: 
Around the hill. through, 
the village,
into the park,
over the pond. 
Out of the park. 

© 2016 james l navas



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"out of the forest", "out of the meadow", "out of the park". but god, i wish i never had to leave. love the simplicity.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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james l navas

11 Months Ago

thanks it means a lot

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Added on October 24, 2016
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Tags: hike, hiking, walk, walking, outdoors, camping, poetry, nature, trekking, woodland, wildlife

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james l navas
james l navas

sheffield, United Kingdom



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