ONCE IN A BLUE MOON

ONCE IN A BLUE MOON

A Poem by Sir Joe
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Storm clouds cover the light; In darkness, there's blindness. The rest, history cites.

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Ours is this summer night
Conquered by the blue moon
As seldom as this flight.

Chirping crickets swallow
The rustle of dry leaves
And of the undergrowth.

Luna peeks through the trees,
Wanting to bear witness
To our mutual feast.

Wild wolves' howls from afar
Harmonize with your groans
As I taste some sugar.

Our sudden about-face!
Your turn's my time to shine;
You o'erlay, I stargaze.

Your head down, my chin up,
Fair lady, gasp for air!
But for God's sake, don't stop!

Storm clouds cover the light;
In darkness, there's blindness.
The rest, history cites.

© 2013 Sir Joe


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Dear Sir Joe

You have honoured me with many reviews, for which thank you.

My turn to return your compliments.

I never know how to start a review.

These days it is simply a mix between how I feel and what a piece says to me.

And yours says much.

Your are from the Philippines and I from the UK.

But as I often say, our differences may as easily unite as much as our similarities may divide.

Your poem:

You caught me in our first line:

"Ours is this summer night"

Wherever we hail from, there are summer nights.

A point of inevitable correspondence.

But once caught you draw me in as any good writer (and you are) should.

Summer nights fade into blue moons.

Crickets do not exist in The UK.

But when I have been abroad, where it is hot, they do.

How to spend an evening listening to the song of cicadas?

How do you spend yours here?

In this case, in my view, making love.

And making love with passion.

Sex in situ.

Sugar in sex?

Yes!

Sex in writing?

Yes!

I apologise to anyone who closes their ears to sex, but it has often appeared to me over the years that it is rather more than a biological function!

Smile please. You are on Candid Camera!

It is a joy!

It is something to luxuriate in.

As you say 'Don't stop'

Best not if you are 'stargazing' while she is 'o'erlay'ing!

You enchant me with your sexual honesty.

Places people perhaps fear to tread as reviewers.

And even in their reviews (no complaint) others refuse to openly state.

Why?

In case they get it wrong.

Are we all prudes?

Who cares? I am not. Nor are you.

Take it as it comes.

Writing and the reading thereof is only ever a joint experience.

You have offered your reality.

I have merely offered you mine and my take; my reality in return.

Have I misunderstood you?

Perhaps.

Should you care?

No!

Accomplished writing?

Yes!

But more than that entirely open honest and disarming.

Can I find fault in your poem?

No or by now even I would have told you so.

Sir Joe?

I shall look forward to reading you more

With my warmest regards

Your friend


James



Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sir Joe

10 Years Ago

Yeah! I'm so excited! =)
James Hanna-Magill

10 Years Ago

Hello Sir Joe and Belle and fiends

If I do anything in life, I only wish to help and no.. read more
Sir Joe

10 Years Ago

SIr James, you are so much a great help to me.
I've already read your profile yesterday and al.. read more



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Storm clouds cover the light;
In darkness, there's blindness.
The rest, history sites.

I am thinking of the grassy place and the title of the movie is "The ruin" lol just kidding, really I love every words express here Sir. Joe :) I love it. It is stunning brilliant piece. Can't describe more than perfect elegant style of write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sir Joe

10 Years Ago

Now that sounds really flattering, Sir Marc. =)
Thank you so much for always saying words of a.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

10 Years Ago

Welcome Sir Joe :)
We all have an animal instinct hidden deep inside our souls...

You've written an extremely eloquent and vivid piece here Sir Joe

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sir Joe

10 Years Ago

I totally agree with you.
Thank you so much, Yellow Butterfly. =)
Yellow Butterfly

10 Years Ago

Your welcome... :O)
Feisty and elegant at the same time...very different in it's approach. I love your style, much enjoyed this one!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sir Joe

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Frieda!
=)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Was my pleasure. :-)

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Last Updated on June 3, 2013
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Sir Joe
Sir Joe

Stoneville, Oragonland, Pearl of the Orient Seas, Philippines



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