Bad puppy

Bad puppy

A Poem by Wyrn Tiger

Oh puppy,
With eyes of blue,
you pissed on the floor,
so screw you,
Oh puppy.
with white fur
you ate my shoe
and then the furniture too
Oh puppy,
with ears that are floppy 
you've made a mess of the trash,
why are you so sloppy?
Oh puppy,
With a big heart
I see you every day as I walk passed your grave,
it reminds me of the days, nothing could keep us apart

© 2018 Wyrn Tiger


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I can’t help it. Dogs get to me every time. Literally cried about the dog in a 30 second Budweiser commercial. So as a dog lover I’m biased, but I feel this one.

I love that you used the word “puppy” because it just emphasized the playful heart of the dog and you did such a good job describing the conflicting feelings one can feel about their pet.

The end just tore me apart, but I enjoyed the read!

Posted 9 Months Ago


reminds me of listening to Elvis Presley singing "Old Shep"---

our pets can do such annoying things, but when they are gone, we sure miss those "annoying things."

j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Oh I could hear my heart break at the final lines....a heartfelt poem indeed

Posted 10 Months Ago


thankyou for entering the ode to my pet comp this is lovely, !

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on April 30, 2018
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Wyrn Tiger
Wyrn Tiger

springfeild, MO



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