Pain

It seems like I have lost it all 

that moment,

when you took every bit of 

Innocence I had 

What gave you the means 

To do such a thing ?,

It's beyond the feeling of

Being hurt, 

It's also demeaning 

To one's trust, 

It's also hurtful 

That I believed in the lies,

Because of you all 

I hear are, all of the lies that you told 

I just want to get out of that spell 

I just want the pain,

 to leave me alone 

And let me move on 

Reviews

[...]

it s just really amazing how you work with the pain. this poem have lot of truth for me. i like To one's trust,
It's also hurtful for me is also true. thanks you for sharing and thank you give me hope. i wish pain leave you soon

[Lydia Shutter]

Monumentally emotional words. Your pain is palpable. Well written. lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

"It's also demeaning

To one's trust,

It's also hurtful

That I believed in the lies,




Because of you all "

A very powerful write ...Awesome...:).......

[Hatchling]

Thanks Sami :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............

[Joe Palmer]

Really strong, raw emotions. Beautifully crated too, lovely stuff!

[Hatchling]

Thank you for the review

[Jaffa Forbes]

This is a good poem - clear cut with a strong message. I would suggest using punctuation to force the reader to take breaths as you would read it yourself, but otherwise well done.

[Hatchling]

Thanks for the review

[stephanie]

I love this poem, its so strong and intriguing, please keep posting!!!!

[Hatchling]

Thank you so much