Changed

Changed

A Poem by Hatchling

I thought I knew the notes 
to the song, then out of the blue 
you changed it all. 

The dream I knew began 
changing into a nightmare 

I wanted out but you pulled
Me back in. 
Wandering through mazes 
hoping to find a way out. 

Not knowing where to turn, 
a little bird showed me the 
way out 

I'm now finally free out 
of the nightmare's clutches 

© 2015 Hatchling


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MCS
I really get this
Glad you're out

Posted 8 Years Ago


And I am glad that you are free from the nightmare's clutches! May you find one who is more deserving of YOU. ~Sharon

Posted 8 Years Ago


A playful, yet deep tone to this piece. Rather nice to hang out with.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Did you mean "wandering through mazes..." Not "wondering." I really quite enjoyed this. It's not always fun when people change things on you after you've known them for so long.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hatchling

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review.
A gorgeous write. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.....:).....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hatchling

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....).......

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