The Night is Upon Us

The Night is Upon Us

A Poem by That_Guy
"

There's a Full Moon tonight, be careful

"
I feel it rising over the cliff,
The hair on my neck standing stiff.
The cycle once again complete,
The Full Moon I anxiously greet.

Now empowered I'm on the prowl,
Deep from my chest you hear my growl.
Bright strong eyes meet your gaze,
You're lost and mine now stuck in my maze.

Run and scream but it will do you no good,
you turn around but only grass is where I once stood.
Confused and scared you search for me,
Then my breath you feel from up in the tree.

You've no where to go and no where to hide,
For me it's been fun, an exhilarating ride,
But the time has come for the hunt to end,
This is the night I will ascend.

© 2012 That_Guy


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Very nice.... that guy is quite the predator!
only 1 critique:
"this is the night I will descend".. but that's just where I would have gone with it...
Other wise amazing write it deserves it's place at the top of your list.

Favorite line:
"Now empowered I'm on the prowl,
Deep from my chest you hear my growl.
Bright strong eyes meet your gaze,
You're lost and mine now stuck in my maze."

I love the thrill of the HUNT! :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow!! I am very excited with this one....must be the animal in me...hehe

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Guy

11 Years Ago

You're not the only one ;)
Dark and carnal... I like! Short but you get the point across...

You made it sexy which, after Twilight, is hard to do lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Guy

11 Years Ago

Team Jacob! ;) hahahaha
That_Girl

11 Years Ago

lol most definitely... At least if you cut off his face he has a nice body. XD
That_Guy

11 Years Ago

hahaha
An amazing read. Very catchy. Very nice. This piece of work is amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Guy

11 Years Ago

thank you, I had some fun with this one
wow, its so amazing, good luck :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Guy

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it
Speak in Silence

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
This one is fun, too :) Creepy and sick. Two of my favorite elements in a poem. I could feel "it" watching me. If I were you, and this is just a suggestion- I would remove the punctuation all-together. I do that in poetry so that the thoughts aren't broken, visually. But I liked this- and I don't like anything :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Guy

11 Years Ago

Who doesn't appreciate a little creepy and some sick every now and again. Maybe "it" is watching... .. read more
Elizabeth

11 Years Ago

:)
Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Guy

11 Years Ago

why thank you ;)
very nice, loved how i could see everything and feel the suspense!! i loved it, keep it up!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Guy

11 Years Ago

Mission accomplished, Thank you ;)
Love it! so suspencful and keeps the reader reading. And fantastic imagery, you indeed did a great job :) keep on writing mr.lover/fighter

Posted 11 Years Ago


That_Guy

11 Years Ago

haha Thank you. I think I'm going to start writing again. lol ;)
Kohleen

11 Years Ago

you should! you're really good at it. Just sayin'
That_Guy

11 Years Ago

I appreciate it
You gave me shivers! Excellent piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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That_Guy
That_Guy

Anza, CA



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First off I'm 23 years old. I'm a lover and a fighter. I've competed in various martial arts and I consider myself a rather opposing figure. On the outside you see tattoos, muscles and scars but what .. more..

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