Donut Whole

Donut Whole

A Poem by Jonathan Bryant Dean

Just a whimsy inspired by: "Who stole the donut?" A Poem by yma~catherine


            Donut Whole

             Jonathan Bryant Dean

Always remember when on a diet,
When sneaking donuts do it quiet
Eat the donut hole,
not the donut whole
Then if you're caught just deny it!

© 2008 Jonathan Bryant Dean

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You successfully made me laugh out loud, thank you.

Posted 4 Years Ago

awesome hahahaha

Posted 4 Years Ago

I do love people with sense of humor. Your poem is funny and true.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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hahaha. this is funny. nice job!

Posted 5 Years Ago

Keep writing those personal stories. It may be your strong suit.

Posted 8 Years Ago

'Tis only five lines it is true
And all of them read, none blue
But the hole won't fill in
Isn't much of a sin
And just far too little to chew

Posted 8 Years Ago

Donut holes, I've had a few myself ...
That was Sweet!!!!!

Donut & Hole went to market
Smart & Final was their target
On their way they picked up Mojo
who dipped himself into Hole's hot cocoa
Donut cried cus Hole fell in
Mojo laughed cus it was time to begin

Posted 8 Years Ago

Posted 8 Years Ago

i like how this poem feels so natural, nothing seems forced. just a simple, good poem about restraining from donuts.

Posted 9 Years Ago

haha, that made me hungry. good job

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Jonathan Bryant Dean
Jonathan Bryant Dean

Middletown, OH

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