Donut Whole

Donut Whole

A Poem by Jonathan Bryant Dean
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Just a whimsy inspired by: "Who stole the donut?" A Poem by yma~catherine http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/haikuhorse/

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            Donut Whole

             Jonathan Bryant Dean

Always remember when on a diet,
When sneaking donuts do it quiet
Eat the donut hole,
not the donut whole
Then if you're caught just deny it!


© 2008 Jonathan Bryant Dean



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You successfully made me laugh out loud, thank you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


awesome hahahaha

Posted 4 Years Ago


I do love people with sense of humor. Your poem is funny and true.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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hahaha. this is funny. nice job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Keep writing those personal stories. It may be your strong suit.

Posted 7 Years Ago


'Tis only five lines it is true
And all of them read, none blue
But the hole won't fill in
Isn't much of a sin
And just far too little to chew


Posted 7 Years Ago


Donut holes, I've had a few myself ...
That was Sweet!!!!!

Donut & Hole went to market
Smart & Final was their target
On their way they picked up Mojo
who dipped himself into Hole's hot cocoa
Donut cried cus Hole fell in
Mojo laughed cus it was time to begin
HIS DIET...



Posted 8 Years Ago




Posted 8 Years Ago


i like how this poem feels so natural, nothing seems forced. just a simple, good poem about restraining from donuts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


haha, that made me hungry. good job

Posted 9 Years Ago



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