Silent Nudity

Silent Nudity

A Poem by Jonathan Bryant Dean

The light is dim, as if it were possible to strain my vision as it grows harder,
to restrain my desires to a satisfaction with mere voyeurism.
My ears strain until I confuse sight with sound.
My ears hear the beauty as is displayed before me, the sleek curves smooth to blurry lines as I am blinded by the sound of your beauty.

What beauty is availed upon the sense of sight, when not a word is spoken.
In the silence the visual sensuality seems to increase, as the ears strain for any possible stimuli.

It is the erotic audiophyxia, as the brain screams for sound, gasping as it were to hear one last breath. The denial of sound, when used as a tantric device, infuses the moment with such pleasure that few lovers know.

I alone am the one that will ask for a picture of your sweet dulcet voice, and an audio recording of your silent nudity...


© 2008 Jonathan Bryant Dean



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The ambiguity of the senses makes this very interesting. Like trying to determine whether a woman's body, mind or voice is more attractive and trying to take them all in at once. Very multilayer and beautiful in a very peculiar way. I'd like to see you continue this using more of the other senses as well. Very pleasurable read. No pun intended.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Very intersting and enjoyable piece. I really love how you use the senses of sight and hearing such as in the line "My ears hear the beauty as is displayed before me, the sleek curves smooth to blurry lines as I am blinded by the sound of your beauty."
Beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting writing. The rhythm is a bit unstable but I love the sensations it brings to mind. The concept is beautiful as if something we see and feel could be taken into a recording and played back. Very nice work. XX

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Audiophyxia? is it something like getting toxin through audio? Listening to something what is intoxicating your mind? no such word but I thought I try to understand. nice writing. Like your imagination. That's all what counts. Good to see you here Jonathan. where have you been. is your father not writing on WC any longer?

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The ambiguity of the senses makes this very interesting. Like trying to determine whether a woman's body, mind or voice is more attractive and trying to take them all in at once. Very multilayer and beautiful in a very peculiar way. I'd like to see you continue this using more of the other senses as well. Very pleasurable read. No pun intended.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is an interesting piece of writing, in that it captures the imagination.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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