It Was The End There

now i find myself

in a bottomless pit cold

it was the end there

flat lined with viewers

just let me rest in peace now

your torture is done

where are the roses

that had lined my bedside table

all that is left dark

slowly light comes in

beginning to float above now

free at last

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Nice economy of words and vivid imagery in this one. We are not told specifically what the situation is, but it sounds like the beginning of a near death experience. Then again, perhaps it is the Full Monty.