chase nirvanna, please.

meditation on love.

love is
unconditional spiritual
devotion,
focused with horizontal
motion.
excess emotion, funneled to one
the antithesis of the concentrated evil
that can come out of guns
it will kill you none the less;
it takes no prisoners
but it's a beautiful pain
please be love's mistress,
please be love's master
please be just a little bit
harder and faster
go after nirvanna
you will find something

go after nirvanna
you will find something
it will be amongst the clouds.

Author's Note

imagine the second paragraph at the end as what pops into your head when you're trying to remember a dream you just had, when the main body of the poem is the dream.

Reviews

[angelina neves]

beautiful!

[masie]

jesus boy... and you say your not that good....
BS!!!! BS BS BS.... all your writings are so poetic and deep...
alternate meanings and the structure of the poems themselves are unique
when i first read this it kinda threw me off at the end... but i get it a little more now..
reading that little blurb at the end. i love how you paint a picture of love ...
and the epic lines : "the antithesis of concentrated evil"
"it will kill you none the less;
it takes no prisoners
but it's a beautiful pain"
i love the mental image i get from that ... its like i draw/ paint/ sketch such an epic picture to this line ...
and same goes for the other line too...
Love you romeo