i died for you

someone died. it was me.

life is over.
i'll never see you again
they shut me in this tiny box.
i can't get out, i'm sorry.
i loved you more then life itself.
even if you didn't know it was true.
i died for you,
baby, i died for you.
even though i know you should
i hate it that you've moved on.
satin pillows,
faces of broken dolls
broken hearts, broken bodies and
minds cancer ridden
feelings stay hidden
i'll stay in my box
that's what you wanted
i hope you remember me
i wish you were haunted
but ghosts aren't real
all of these
feelings we're feeling
epitaphs on stones
holding me down
making sure i'm drowned
six feet under ground.

Reviews

[Ignorance Was Bliss Eve..]

I like this, It's something some have felt.
I like th tone of the emotion.
Great piece.

[masie]

well written, intense... of course i like it...
i can relate a lot to this poem.. on many occasions...
question to be answered is
what inspired such a depressing piece

[Emmie]

I'm speechless... amazing. You got the emotion across very well.
"that's what you wanted"--That's an amazingly powerful guilt trip to the person you're talking about.
Nice write =)