prominence

prominence

A Poem by light years in love
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08/2014

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In the awakening

Of harvested skies

I’ve lessened

Silver laced clouds

That deceives

I will go further

 

Into the pulse

 

The humbling touch

 

That is limitless in love

 

Your love

 

Here I’m grafted

 

Swaying in Your subtle clemency

In Your absolution, in rain

My hands are held high

To where clarity lies

Swinging my hips to

Brilliant smiles

 

They won’t hold

Me back this time

No longer will I pick

At the scab of things

I don’t understand

I chose to dance

 

I chose to fight



© 2014 light years in love



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No more flight, it is time to fight. I loved the ending of this, it was so strong willed. This is a piece with some conviction for sure. Lovely work my friend!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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I love to dance and have a fighter instinct.. ;) i liked it a lot.. You always give your poems a rhythmic flow. And i am a great fan of rhythm... well done

~Sophy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like the other reviewers, I think this has a really nice, even flow. I particularly like the last three lines.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it Josh. Very beautifully written and so empowering.


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

light years in love

3 Years Ago

Good morning Ana. Thank you.
Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

Good morning Josh, you're welcome. :)

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