bet your life on it

bet your life on it

A Chapter by light years in love
"

12/2011 (Blood type B: Installment Nine)

"
The black sun rises like
a violent death ray
causing me to cower
in your illusory arms
boiling is the touch
of your memories 
melding into the
stages of my mind 

Out of the reaches
of a obsidian dawn
I lay,
 
roaming the wonders of my madness 

awaiting blessed nightfall

Spectral visions whisk me
speedily forward in time to 
shadowy dusk, sweet sunset...

When I awake blood will
stain the snow, you can
bet your life on it







© 2013 light years in love



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Oh that was great lol "I can't wait until the sun goes down so I can hunt and kill some more! I really love tasting your precious lovely delicate blood! I know I'm a little pyscho, but I need to sustain my life as well. Your life will have to be sacrficed. Oh well." Haha I loved this chapter. Thanks for sharing.

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This was pretty cool. I like the ending of it. The implication that death is waiting, a predator stalking its prey. Good work

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intense. Macabre. visceral. Well done.

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Oh that was great lol "I can't wait until the sun goes down so I can hunt and kill some more! I really love tasting your precious lovely delicate blood! I know I'm a little pyscho, but I need to sustain my life as well. Your life will have to be sacrficed. Oh well." Haha I loved this chapter. Thanks for sharing.

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Wow your poems are always so interesting. You really show creative ideas that can leave themes such a love or sadness but, one that lures the minds of us into though of such illusive words that mystify us. Anyways wonderful descriptions and interesting poem as a well done as I really enjoyed this as you put emphasis on certain words.

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wow! interesting piece! :D

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Ouch! fantastic and very powerful:)

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Nothing more powerful than the image of blood on snow! What a rush! I am gonna love these! xoxo

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You bet your life that I find this awesome.

Again, make this a book.

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A very touching and sad poem... A great write it is ...

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cool, dark, vamp-ish...

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