convalescence

convalescence

A Chapter by light years in love
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05/2012 (Blood type B: Installment Twelve)

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We the cannibals held captive
will celebrate soon in crimson
rivers. Civilization will crawl 
before corruption. Quenching 
our contagious thirst during 
this crusade of consternation.

Countries will consent to our
contingency and captains will
cower in confusion. Disbelief  
will cease and cognition will
climax terror. Carrion will
continue to captivate. 

Clad in calamity we will cut
through the countless hordes.
Consuming their claret as we
correlate and cultivate with
tenacity and courage. Our
carnage will cascade hope.                              



© 2013 light years in love



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There is something about C...

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yep this one bites in and never lets go, such placed word usage in ebb bloody retribution of darkness as a believer in divine segregation of being the undead to a living world. The images of this piece invoke a mobbing acceptance, a grave message of revolt instead of torches lit we have fangs blood read... bravo

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Alright, this was definitely an interesting and original piece. For one you definitely had a thing going on with the letter 'c' even though this could never be a tongue twister. As for the piece it self makes me think of our present state in this wold, a world unknown, or even just our possible furture. This could just be me though. Imagery, I love it in general and you defnitely had it going on in your piece; "civilization will crawl before corruption." Anyways well done. Can't wait for you to blow my mind.

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formidable wordplay in this one. Well penned

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A very good ending to the story. I had to do a quick re-read of the outstanding story. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

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Brillaint.

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Ok not what I expected. Which was good. I like suprises. This was one of those and I enjoyed it.

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nice one Josh, vivid imagery, you've been gone for a while, glad to see you back.

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A poetic version of all the rhetoric spewed across millennia.
A metal gauntlet fist and sword in one hand, a goblet of claret blood in the other and the next sacrificed lamb of the feast is brought forth.
Nice tight stanzas. Good continuity.

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This is brilliant and makes me want to think a little harder as to whether I can write a book.

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Beautiful application of words starting with 'C'. 'Civilization crawling before corruption' - nothing can be more true than this. Josua your crusade against our 'so called' civilization is actually reflecting your committment to protect the human face from its own vices. Superb......

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Great chapter.
You done a wonderful job on the vocabulary and word structure.
Easy to read :)
Great job.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

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