my heart

my heart

A Poem by Canicus

you are
my smiles
to hold you in my arms
I would walk countless miles

my happiness
goes by the name of you
you can easily make me smile
with anything you do

you are the once
empty space in my mind
you are nothing like anyone else
you're one of a kind

you are the
light in me
amazing and beautiful
as far as the eye can see

the one thing that sets
you and others apart
you are
my heart

© 2011 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
how is it?

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This is really good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That was amazing. I loved it. Keep writing! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderfully written, I love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Just wonderful :]

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww tht was so sweet:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


really beautiful write. enjoyed ; )

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful(: It's deep and wonderful, full of such love and happiness..
You put a lot of feeling into your poems. It's what makes them so great..

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was wonderful and so beautiful. Keep up the good work.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really deep and I feel so much love coming through the poem it almost made me cry. Wonderful!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple words where meaning runs deep. I especially like the ending " you are my heart" a great way of summing up your ideas and concluding the feel of the poem. Good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago



First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

343 Views
11 Reviews
Rating
Added on July 12, 2011
Last Updated on July 12, 2011

Author

Canicus
Canicus

WV



Writing
Should I? Should I?

A Poem by Canicus


Your Hero Your Hero

A Poem by Canicus



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


part of me part of me

A Poem by Canicus


perfect life perfect life

A Poem by Canicus