I promise

I want to wrap you in my arms

feel you pressed against me

staring deep into your eyes

forever in this moment is where I want to be

 

run my fingers through your hair

feel your heart beat against my chest

rest your head on my shoulder

no second thoughts, you're the best

 

hold on to you tight

seeing you smile

running my hand down your cheek

I want it to last awhile

 

resting my forhead against yours

softly pressing our noses together

not caring what happens next

as long as we're together

 

once I hold you in my arms

baby, I promise I'll never let you go

I'll hold you close to me

I love you more than you'll ever know

Reviews

[Lee Gupperton]

Very sweet.. Well written and touching. I loved it.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very tender poem. Loved it.

[Day Dreamer]

So many emotions written so perfectly. I loved it. Keep writing! :)

[Tasha]

This was really sweet, I liked it a lot.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Roxi L]

Very sweet. Your emotion is completly overwhelming in this. I really like it. Great Write Joshua.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Tom Chan]

this one is really sweet :)

[donny ingraham]

Nice write, promises are sometimes broken. Within this poem your heat is in the right place. If you wrote it for another, they will enjoy it more than myself. Great write