Jewel

you shine like a diamond
causing a bright light
in my dark heart
and everlasting delight

the light glaring off of you
showing your marvolous beauty
you need to be safe
I will make protecting you my life long duty

people staring at you
causing them to go blind
because they can't handle such beauty
you blow their mind

showing all of your good qualities
as for bad ones
not one can be found
you have none

you are the gorgeous jewel
setting in my heart, luminous
I shall keep you safe
to me you are precious

Author's Note

maybe some spelling errors, but how did you like it?

Reviews

[Day Dreamer]

*my

[Day Dreamer]

I loved it, not like, but love. Well written, mr friend. Keep writing! :)

[Tasha]

I didn't see any errors. This was amazing Keep it up.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Roxi L]

I love this poem. I didnt see any grammer errors. Keep up the amazing work!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Becky C Strukamp]

You did an amazing job. You create the definition of love beautifully. Excellent poem.