Make the world go 'round

You should really be carful

about who you pester

don't make them into a fool

or make them your court jester

 

just because we aren't like you

you cal us freaks and wierdos

but in the future

we could be your heros

 

does it make you feel good about yourself

to bring other people down

make their day horrid

make them into a clown

 

one day the tables will turn

some will be cold as ice

some will be forgiving

but when it's all over you'll wish you were nice

 

us, the ones you call

wierdos and freaks

yeah we make the world go 'round

watch someday you'll be bossed around by geeks

Author's Note

inspired by the poem "Sweet Music To My Ears" by Maria Whitlock
what do you think

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Small miss-type in stanza two missing a letter. Besides that, I like this. Nice how you used "court jester" and "pester" in the first stanza rhyming, and it fits so well with your meaning and feelings in this poem. I like how the poem flips over to show the other side with the last two stanzas.

[Sarah]

Realy nice...
XD

[Day Dreamer]

Aww, thanks for making something out of my poem bud. Loved it, and went quite well along with my poem. Glad to know I inspired you. Keep writing! :)
(P.S. To the bullies out there, don't make fun off people, they might be your boss one day and as my 8th grade science teacher puts it, there's a new word for nerd, it's called boss.)

[Steph K]

The rhyme pattern in this is amazing. The words flow freely and intricately. Beautiful.

[Roxi L]

I think maybe some more heart and soul should go into this poem. Think about your rhymes. Other then that good job.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[ClosedEyesOpen]

i think this wasnt youre best in the sense of how much heart was put into it but it does have a really good consept and i enjoyed reading it =)

[Lee Gupperton]

I loved it!

[Tasha]

So true! Nice write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Jane Doe]

AMEN!!!!!!!!:D lol loved it!!!:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Makes one think before they speak and act. I enjoyed reading it. Nice write.