In my own darkness

I feel like I'm falling apart

there's no hope for me

no way to get me out of the dark

it's where my soul will be forever

 

I'm stuck and confused

in this on going darkness

I can't turn back now

the darkness is now endless

 

The further I go on

the darker it gets

the feelings of sorrow

one never forgets

 

did I do something

to put this curse upon me

sick with this plague

darkness as far as I can see

 

the feeling of hopelessness

thoughts that no one cares

when I drown in my own darkness

everyone just sits and stares

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like those last two lines. A lot of deep and dark feelings wrapped into a poem nicely.

[HeIsWe]

I really like this.

[Day Dreamer]

I honestly like this, despite the 'theme' of it. Wonderful work, Joshua. Keep writing! :)

[ClosedEyesOpen]

i really like this one it has a lot of meaning behind the words. good work keep it up =]

[Roxi L]

This is amazing and sad and amazing and amazing and did I say amazing?

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[Becky C Strukamp]

I think you write amazing poetry. This is wonderful.