Are you Her?

I can feel you ... are you my angel? If you're reading this, if You..are reading this; if You are Her..I'm waiting for you!

  I feel you,
  Writing me your soul on paper;
  I see you,
  In dreams when slumber takes a hold of me;
  I breathe you,
  Words are magic from your soul;
  Are you the One?
  I'm yours..are you the One I won't let go?

   (..I know you're out there...I sense you!)

Author's Note

I've been getting messaged about this poem and have been receiving some interesting responses in term of not being realistic. I just want to say this to all who have difficult times believing is something that's not 'there yet': poetry is passion, and it is an expression of the soul. This is my way to express my soul's music, and THE ONE that could be searching for me, will understand; just like I understand her poems to me. Believe and live a life of stories and fairy tales; Imagine and feel the same wonderful burning desire you once did as a child! I know I am!

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Searching for the ONE with the confidence to stand out .. hear your soul and FEEL. This is short and sweet and I think straight to the point. You have a vision and great idea of what you are looking for.. I feel strong confidence running through this.. you end with no promises.. only that you will be their's if they are the ONE you won't let go. I like the honesty in this.. you will not settle I feel from the words I am reading.. No reason you couldn't possibly find another poetic soul searching.. I hope you find it! Great outpouring.. I admire someone who can put the cards on the table!

[Luna]

Everyone is searching for something, their mind and heart always yearning. The beauty of this piece and the portrayal of the search is fantastic. Just because it hasn't arrived yet doesn't mean it isn't out their. Great work.

[Kaelyn Shea]

this is so sweet! :) great job

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Simply irresistable a real classic poem which invokes so much passion and desire,perhaps there is an angel playing with your heart or maybe one that is around the corner pulling at your heart.

[Brandee D. Hack]

Grand poem. :) I really enjoyed this piece, Great job for so few of words. Not all poems need to be long. :)

[deeps]

I thought I had reviewed this write I guess not.
I think it's about the most amazing write I have ever read.
It's okay to express your feelings if you want to.
I think this is simply wonderful

[heido]

There is no one
There is only the bond of two
A complete wholeness of self with the complete wholeness of the other
Once you are at peace with your own
And she is as well
The two of you will find eachother and a bond can be forged
Souls seek that which to fullfill, not that which to complete

[SM Davis]

Hmmm...Nice emotive piece here. I've read your profile and am looking forward to reading more of your work. I have to say, however, that if you are hoping to find "Her.." I hope you have more than words. Most women, myself included, don't fall so easy for the "romance lines". Took my husband a year to figure out that the one liners weren't working, no matter how sincere.

Nice piece though.

[Cherie Paregrine Isis]

Wow this is really deep!I love the meaning you have in this deep poem,i felt the emotion like a wave of feeling entering my body and going thru and thru.Bravo!I found my new favorite writer for poetry!

[jessfoundwonder]

this is nice. pretty cliche, but sometimes that's the only way to say it.
thanks for the review by the way.