The Meaning of Life

The Meaning of Life

A Poem by JustWantLove
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You know who you are!

"


Birth
You
Death


(... I wrote this for my own sake;
In my own mind, dream-like;
Only three words, they are meant
To inspire the reader and provoke
Their own reasons;
All comments, are your own;
They are your own answers.
Whatever road You take,
Is and will be your life!  ...)

© 2010 JustWantLove


Author's Note

JustWantLove
'You' - the guiding star at night for life; The glory destined to fulfill and sought; You gave me life and dreams, removed all worries; You are my Queen, my bride, my ...

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Nice and simple. Many interpretations are possible. As you wrote, it's also a good reminder. I also interpreted it that understanding what "You" or "I" (which might have been better in general I think) means takes your entire life. It's in a way the meaning of life. There are other interpretations, but the note you wrote narrows it down if the reader wants to. Still beauty in simplicity and the option it provides for the reader. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


yes - we have choices.. but I disagree, there is no birth and no death. wonderful poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! A lot of ideas spur from three words. Either interconnected or not, it surely fills in the blank intentionally placed. :D

We or me can either replace the one in the middle. Just for thought, no man lives and dies as an island. For one day we must face birth and death in surprising ways we'll never know and even together. :)

Overall, job well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


In between birth and death its just You. The journey starts from birth and ends at death. What we do in that span is important. your reveal the romantic side of yours again

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really love the simplicity in this
the beginning and the ending are always there so it is up to the middle to be important, to be worth it and when the middle is someone worth it all...its a good life
brilliant Sir

Posted 14 Years Ago


O.o Death is inevitable. A fact very few of us can face.

Posted 14 Years Ago


hmm. i think you should be me, because me is all i have, there is no you that keeps me together or brings me joy or completes me because when it all comes right down to it...


everyone dies alone.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it. Three words that provoke so much thought. You chose your life. You chose the path you take. You chose the people you love and the people you want to be surrounded by. You chose whether you want to marry have kids. You chose your career path. "You" defines so much that you don't need to mention anything else because everything stems from "You". Three words that say it all.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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okay this is a complex thing to decipher and at 15 the best I can do is that between Birth and Death , the life we lead is our own. We can make the journey unforgettable or we can succumb to the moribund ways of it

Posted 14 Years Ago


So true, so true.. I love the authors note especially. Short- but somehow everyone in life can relate to this.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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