Dream Of The Heaven

just an imagination about the ideal world, heaven

Beyond the horizon,
above the clouds,
I dream of the heaven,
where live Gods.
Gods, in the sense,
the people with hearts,
where love & honesty are always above,
doors of home, that open for all;
smile that is not fake,
and welcomes love;
no greed, no lust,
no crimes, no dis~trust.
where God themselves,
painted people's heart.
Hearts filled with purity,
happiness is not concentrated in just some.
I woke, still thinking about the heaven.
Is there a place, similar, on earth?

Author's Note

advices are welcomed

Reviews

[The Black Warrior]

Beautifully done, great imagery... made me imagine of the great world so called home, where God cleans m soul and make me whole. There is a shape hole and only he can fill that void. My desperate heart is calling for help, only he can bring it to rest. The God of love stands and wait. With open arms extended to me. "Come in my child" this is what he says. I strode to his heart and there I live.

Thank you for sharing... this is nicely written!

Two thumbs up! :D

[ayesha gupta]

thanx a lot for writing review. i do appreciate.

[The Black Warrior]

You are welcome... thank you for sharing... I enjoy it a lot!

[Surya pradha]

very nice poetry. earth is heaven to me.

[Wórdsmíth]

This poem`s appeared to me a verse of "philosophy" having the tender taste of "peace", "joy", & the depiction of love. Every soul wants to find love on the planet earth but I say ... once they find the love in themselves, they find the "heaven" on the earth. Nice imagery!

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for reviewing. m glad that u liked it.

[Alejandra Marie]

Sweet poem, I love the concept. The words flow nicely. I think if you were to extend your description of heaven the poem would much more depth but still, lovely.

[ayesha gupta]

ya. your guess is true. but for the 1st attempt, i tried to keep it short.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. You asked the questions, all of asked. The poem danced on questions on God and heaven. I believe both are near. We need a kind heart and open mind to see. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[hardeep sabharwal]

A sweet and beautiful poem, quest for a better world,
good job

[Sophy Freebirds]

An intriguing theme.. you would have better reflected on the vision of it then it would have been better. But still a nice write.the lines flow softly from one to other. Keep writing :)

~Sophy

[ayesha gupta]

thanx. i will improve. :-)