what love gives, it takes it all back

here is an imagination of a boy, whose lover passed in an accident.

it was the saddest day,
of your funeral,
like my heart had stop beating,
my body numb.
i remember your smile,
our kisses, our love,
why lord called you above?
you used to say,
"love lighten the world,
makes us human,
a better person"
your words got faded,
with your soul,
now i m without you,
my world dark and alone.
"i love you" ,
you used to say,
is this your love?
you left me with a broken-heart.
you taught me,
"life is so beautiful",
now you made it miserable.
no matter what people,
say about love,
what i know is, it gives,
but it takes it all.

Author's Note

plz do write reviews. this is a complete imagination, based on movie (ek villian)

Reviews

[Steph]

Thank you for sharing this wonderful, poignant poem. The emotions are really strong throughout.
" your words got faded,
with your soul,
now i m without you,
my world dark and alone."
My favourite line ^^ I really enjoyed it!

[ayesha gupta]

thanx a lot. i m glad you enjoyed. :)

[The Black Warrior]

This is beautiful, deep, and very emotional. well written!

Thank you for sharing!

~Suk ;)

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for stoping by and reading it. i feel happy when my work is liked.

[RAOrourke]

say about love,
what i know is, it gives,
but it takes it all.
beautiful and powerful verse! Well done!

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for writing review. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"you used to say,
"love lighten the world,
makes us human,
a better person"
your words got faded,
with your soul,"

A very good poem. I like it tremendously...:)............

[ayesha gupta]

thanks sami. m glad you liked it.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome....:)........

[hardeep sabharwal]

nice, emotions are strong and you have done a good job,,

I have not yet seen Ek villain, but now I have to :P

[ayesha gupta]

hehe. ok. i liked that movie. and the very first scene is of funeral. aapka suspense ni kharab karungi story batake. enjoy the movie.

[hardeep sabharwal]

:) pta hai india k bahar k writers sochenge ki kya likh rahe ha ye

[ayesha gupta]

hehe. ha. but hinglish is awesome. fb n messaging mei toh common h ye.

[Briana O'Connor]

Such sadness in the truth. Your words enunciate sadness in many ways. Very well penned.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for your review, ma'am. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A well written poem. Based on life and logic. I like the logic of Jack London book "When Gods laugh." We can't win in love. Death will separate us. The poem open the door to thoughts and conversation. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ayesha gupta]

:) thanks to you too for reading and appreciating my work.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Surya pradha]

very nice,you really know how to convey emotions, don't you!

[ayesha gupta]

thanx for review and ur appreciation. :-)

[RaeStems]

Oh wow, such strong emotions. This is beautiful, it really made me feel this person's loss.

[ayesha gupta]

thanks for your review. and emotions are strong because i get so much connected with the lead roles that i almost cry on these scenes.

[RaeStems]

I feel like I should start doing this for movies I love, it is a beautiful way to show how it captured you in the story so well to be able to connect to characters so well.

[ayesha gupta]

:) yep. try it and send me read requests.