Please

Please

A Poem by Diamondjules
"

Trying to let go of a man that told me after 3 weeks, "He did not feel the Magic anymore".... and here is my heartfelt reply

"

Please

Let me think about someone else

Please

Let my heart pound for someone else

Please

Let my thoughts be about someone else

Please

Let my heart long for someone else

Please

Let my breasts tingle for someone else

Please

Let me be wet for someone else

Please

Find somebody else to text

Please

Let me find someone else to watch Football with

Please

Let me… Let Go

Of you….

 

© 2013 Diamondjules


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

At times when we want to really to get the thought of someone out of your head its somewhat hard to do so. seems so many things reminds you of this agony. Nice partake in showing the feel of aggravation for wanting to lose memory of past experiences with someone. Nice use of the repeated word please in a strong sense of feeling Please let me let you go as if you're being haunted by the said individual. sometimes its hard to get over someone, but it can be done but not always the case. As always keep writing fellow writer.

Posted 11 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

193 Views
1 Review
Added on January 4, 2013
Last Updated on January 4, 2013

Author

Diamondjules
Diamondjules

Raligh, NC



About
I just fell into writing poetry when Poets.com was still alive and kicking. I wrote 498 poems/short stories, etc. It was a blast! Thanks to my friend, Lunadawn (on this site) - she told me to get m.. more..

Writing