HER NAME WAS LUNA

HER NAME WAS LUNA

A Poem by Julie Grenness
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For a contest, unrequited love.

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Her name was Luna,

Nearly met when they were younger,

They met on the 12th of never,

They grew old apart, whatever,

Ships in the night of stars,

Ever loving from afar,

She met him on the 12th of never,

Luna kept him young forever.

© 2015 Julie Grenness


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Very Beautiful and Great . . .

Posted 8 Years Ago
So many emotions in so few words... I love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago
This is beautiful. You can feel the pain of loving someone that doesn't even know you exist, and who could never love you in return. Beautifully written and expressive. Well done, Ms. Julie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Tags: Luna, love, ships in the night.

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Julie Grenness
Julie Grenness

Bayswater, Melbourne., Victoria., Australia



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Greetings, my name is Julie. I live in Victoria, Australia. I am a 61 yo widow, a mostly retired teacher and tutor. Currently, I tutor two ESL students in English, as well as Maths and Science. Scribb.. more..

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