pond at dawn

pond at dawn

A Poem by Juliespenhere.

ponds crackled
first light hits
ducks come out of
hiding
the reeds they knew
all night
have shed their grey
protective light
now bright green
with the early morning
sun
the little fish go soaring
through the once dark waters
now so blue
the swan it shows off
icy white her feathers
shimmer in the dawns first light
id love to sit and ponder thee
to just sit and watch the 
ponds family
the peace the serenity
the still waters joy
alas I'm not a duck
its work I have to do
ill see you later my sweet
pond and sweet little families
when I next come to see
sunrise shed its glowful light
on thee
as I sit under that great gum tree

© 2017 Juliespenhere.



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And they will all be waiting to welcome you Julie. Your delightful poem is is filled with nature’s images and joy. Little fishes, swans and quacking ducks-“ The pond’s family”and so it is, magical. Colorful, musical, beautiful. Love it!

Posted 2 Months Ago


all that peace shattered by responsibility....

j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


A cute and playful melody throughout --specifically the ending with its quaint rhyming.
I see it now with the ducks and scene on the waters.


Posted 2 Months Ago


wrote quickly with coffee sunday am

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Added on September 30, 2017
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Juliespenhere.
Juliespenhere.

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I still work full time and live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend I write quickly it just flows and bubbles qui.. more..

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