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please stay

A Poem by Juliespenhere
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romantic!!!

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Please stay
while the roses close up
this moonlit night
please stay with me
whilst the stars
wish upon their every might
please stay and lie with me
whilst the mossies
fly to me and find their bite
please stay and be my friend
whilst the wind gently blows
my skirt up high
please stay and never leave
till morning comes
and next day is done
please stay and
make me breakfast please
please stay and never go
till our time on earth is done
and we are free



© 2018 Juliespenhere



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Such a romantic poem, makes me long for my love and for me to stay with her... Thank you for sharing the beautiful words

Posted 5 Months Ago


I like the way you made this in a longing way.

Completely open, one who needs a close friend and defender.



Posted 6 Months Ago


If You ever need me I’m here anytime any place🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


This is so wonderful. it's really nice

Posted 6 Months Ago


Awww, this is nice. 😊. Simply imagining the scene puts a smile on my face.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Juliespenhere

6 Months Ago

Thanks so very much
A guy who makes breakfast, is a stayer.
Hope this time on earth is a long one.



Posted 6 Months Ago


Juliespenhere

6 Months Ago

ah yes i agree
thank so much Paul for taking the time to read and review
A wonderful poem shared dear Julie.
"please stay and
make me breakfast please
please stay and never go
till our time on earth is done
and we are free"
The above lines. Simple actions we shall need and be graceful for.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Juliespenhere

6 Months Ago

thankyou for stopping by in your busy life you write so well, thanks so much. julie.
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

Ain't so busy dear Julie. 8 days off from work. Always a pleasure to read your work.
a lovely romantic write, always the best scenes from which love may build on.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Juliespenhere

6 Months Ago

thankyou so much
please has a sweetness that belongs to our lovers.

regards,
al

Posted 6 Months Ago


reminds me of something in a movie...where the guy would not go home with the woman unless he could have breakfast...he didn't just want sex and a goodbye...but at least the commitment of a morning to come.

j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Juliespenhere

6 Months Ago

ohh id love to see that movie
do you remember the name Jacob?
hope you are well, than.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

6 Months Ago

I wish I could remember the movie...I just remember that line...sorry.

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Juliespenhere
Juliespenhere

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I still work full time and live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend I write quickly it just flows and bubbles qui.. more..

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