please stay

please stay

A Poem by Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
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romantic!!!

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Please stay
while the roses close up
this moonlit night
please stay with me
whilst the stars
wish upon their every might
please stay and lie with me
whilst the mossies
fly to me and find their bite
please stay and be my friend
whilst the wind gently blows
my skirt up high
please stay and never leave
till morning comes
and next day is done
please stay and
make me breakfast please
please stay and never go
till our time on earth is done
and we are free

© 2018 Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)


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Very romantic! Sweet and lyrical, she sings to her love, “Please stay”...exquisite words describing magical nights and mornings and forevers...is she a siren on the sea rocks? No, simply a woman in love.Beautiful flow and natural, wonderful imagery. I hear a song in this poem, with strings and flutes in the background. Love it Julie!:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

6 Years Ago

ahh thankyou so much was about to delete this when i read your review!!!
THanks friend x
Annette Pisano-Higley

6 Years Ago

Please don’t delete- it’s so beautiful! Xo

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Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend and a few during week I write quickly it just flows and bu.. more..

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