Truly

Writing as I go again

It’s true
It’s honest
It’s truly truly true
He said
He loved her
For the very first time
She heard the words
That moonlit bay
That moon so bright
No shadows in her heart
That wondrous youthful
Starlit night

Author's Note

The night my to be husband now ex but still friends close many moons ago told me how he felt

Reviews

[Correspondence]

This is a very nice write. Not only is it written well structurally, but also written very well emotionally. ;)

[Ghost]

Love has its moments and the ups and downs play so much on our hearts... It sounded like a joyful write tinged with sadness... But it was an over all beautiful write..

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Sometimes the truth is just not - only time tells many a tale- some tales better learnt sooner than later- as long as I nag as we remain true to ourselves that’s the most important thing as everyone’s truth are different- sadly- great words🌹

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and those words mean so much at the time...years later we may be separated from the one who said them and wonder how much they really meant at the time...did that person think he or she meant them? Or were they just said in the heat of a youthful moment.

j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

yes we meant them
Thanks for review

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Ahh young love
Ain’t it grand