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writing as i go very rusty written in several minutes

the blue bird

the red robin

the kookaburra

the owl

and the seagull

over the  sea

what do they all have in

common

i ask

of you sitting there

alone in your chair

wings

they all have wings

they fly

they are free

just like you and me

grow me some wings

grow me a spirit of freedom

grow me a sense of purpose

to follow my dreams

to fly over the ocean

and up the mountains too

to soar through the valleys

and beyond to grey and blue

give me some courage

give me some spring some spite

in my step

grow me some wings

i asked to heaven i just cried

He said

havent you seen them yet?

you have to learn how to fly

learn how to stride

leave the world  and all the

passers by

they are there on your chair

wrap them in your heart

strap them on with strength

and then you and them

will  never part

the blue bird just sat there

gazing through

my window glass

with the sun behind

him

he looked like heavens messenger

i sat there and forever

will wonder

with my hand in my pocket

my head in my heart

all mixed up

not sure where to really start

He flew away

as I closed my eyes and prayed

hopefully that blue bird

will visit me

anon another day

and show me

my wings

hes an expert you see

he knows a thing or two

of the wide blue yonder yue

Reviews

[Rye]

What an amazing write, This is so wonderful.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

thankyou so much

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Wow a fantastic poem,musing and inspired by bird flight n freedom in metaphor. Written wonderfully. Kudos.


Plz Pleez do comment/review my newest poem too

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Oh thanks so much for your kind review