WHERE I COME FROM

WHERE I COME FROM

A Poem by yashmita13

WHERE I COME FROM

crunching leaves
a smell of the chilling breeze 
snakes, beetles, butterflies 
dancing around as the wind goes by

sleeping with stars above your eyes
and the mysterious sounds from the caves 
missing it all as my flight flies high
knowing it'll never be the same

dried lakes; no fish to swim
no leaves to shade you from the harsh sunlight
insects and bees not coming out to play
anymore tonight

i have come back, but to what?
the leaves on ground
or the factory smoke?
the place where i was before
this isn't where i come from......but the place that was here not-so-long ago

the place where i cry
laugh, eat and dance
the only place i could feel the sky

the place that i came from
the place that now has gone.


© 2014 yashmita13



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I enjoyed the poem. I like the questions asked and the honest walk in the poetry.
"the place where i cry
laugh, eat and dance
the only place i could feel the sky

the place that i came from
the place that now has gone."
Thank above lines stand on their own. Truth in them. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

i am so glad you liked it
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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So aggression in your write.
Really powerful write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


yashmita13

2 Years Ago

thank you saddam
Saddam

2 Years Ago

Most welcome dear.
Saddam

2 Years Ago

Most welcome dear.
So aggression in your write.
Really powerful write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I enjoyed the poem. I like the questions asked and the honest walk in the poetry.
"the place where i cry
laugh, eat and dance
the only place i could feel the sky

the place that i came from
the place that now has gone."
Thank above lines stand on their own. Truth in them. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

i am so glad you liked it
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is sad, yet a beautiful write. I can see you haven't played much with words here, rather kept it simply. The meaning is conveyed with all its essence and it has its heart in the right place..... I would suggest you publicize such writes of yours. Not just for the beauty of a feeling but for its moral and civil messages.... people who adore poetry will definitely think about it!! Keep it up Girl!!! Thanks

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

thanks a lot for reading! but i like keeping my writings a little to myself. not too many people kno.. read more
Nice feel....must be missing the place you were before....
awesome feel....I loved it....

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

thank you!
nice. every thing change with time indeed !

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it very nice. sounds to me like song. all place changes and we feel strangers when we go back.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like your wording! Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

3 Years Ago

thank u.....

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