alone

alone

A Poem by yashmita13

i feel alone

like no one knows me
like no one cares for me
like no one gets me

no one gets why i dont want to live like this
no one gets what i really want to do
no one gets why each night i cry
like no one can even see me through

what i really mean when i say i quit
what i really mean when i tell you to try
what i really mean when i say goodbye
and no one is willing to try

maybe
my tears represent something bigger
maybe
my intolerance to you has a reason
maybe
when i tell you to leave me alone
its only the best for you

you don't get me
but im always there for you
you don't see me
but my eyes are always on you
you never help me
but i always advise you

dont you see?

im torn not crazy
im smiling but not happy
im annoyed at life not moody

but even when im there for you
what is it that you do?

i feel alone
and that could just be because of you


© 2015 yashmita13



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lyrical and emotional. I know what it means to feel alone. To be experiencing a kinda of one-side relation. this is something I can relate to. Thank you for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


yashmita13

2 Years Ago

thank you :) im glad you liked it
We are always alone until we let another in

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

What I meant was like one sided support but ur take on the poem is interesting. Thanks
I know that feeling , you are a good poet

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

im glad someone can relate. thanks a lot
this was a really great poem, and i can relate to it. thanks for the awesome piece :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

im glad u liked it
Yes, there is nothing more painful it seems than feeling alone when others are around you.
When you feel invisible or don't matter to them. It really could be them. Impressive poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

thank you sooo much
Tina Kline

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome.
Reminds me of that saying : you have over stayed your welcome.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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yashmita13

2 Years Ago

haha yeah it does.
The way you repeat words makes them echo in my mind. No one... maybe.. Like the soft whisper of our desires trying to wake. good poem.

(try to make it a little shorter. Alot can be sumerized in a much shorter fashion. dont want to reader to be bored cx )

Posted 2 Years Ago


yashmita13

2 Years Ago

agreed. this was kind of a drafty poem. i will edit it. thanks

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