alone

i feel alone

like no one knows me

like no one cares for me

like no one gets me

no one gets why i dont want to live like this

no one gets what i really want to do

no one gets why each night i cry

like no one can even see me through

what i really mean when i say i quit

what i really mean when i tell you to try

what i really mean when i say goodbye

and no one is willing to try

maybe

my tears represent something bigger

maybe

my intolerance to you has a reason

maybe

when i tell you to leave me alone

its only the best for you

you don't get me

but im always there for you

you don't see me

but my eyes are always on you

you never help me

but i always advise you

dont you see?

im torn not crazy

im smiling but not happy

im annoyed at life not moody

but even when im there for you

what is it that you do?

i feel alone

and that could just be because of you

Reviews

[MadalaJose]

lyrical and emotional. I know what it means to feel alone. To be experiencing a kinda of one-side relation. this is something I can relate to. Thank you for sharing

[yashmita13]

thank you :) im glad you liked it

[SuspectGray]

We are always alone until we let another in

[yashmita13]

What I meant was like one sided support but ur take on the poem is interesting. Thanks

[Zoomout]

I know that feeling , you are a good poet

[yashmita13]

im glad someone can relate. thanks a lot

[Not here]

this was a really great poem, and i can relate to it. thanks for the awesome piece :)

[yashmita13]

im glad u liked it

[Tina Kline]

Yes, there is nothing more painful it seems than feeling alone when others are around you.
When you feel invisible or don't matter to them. It really could be them. Impressive poem.

[yashmita13]

thank you sooo much

[Tina Kline]

You're very welcome.

[Anonymous -]

Reminds me of that saying : you have over stayed your welcome.

[yashmita13]

haha yeah it does.

[Matthew James Ginn]

The way you repeat words makes them echo in my mind. No one... maybe.. Like the soft whisper of our desires trying to wake. good poem.

(try to make it a little shorter. Alot can be sumerized in a much shorter fashion. dont want to reader to be bored cx )

[yashmita13]

agreed. this was kind of a drafty poem. i will edit it. thanks