can't you see?

can't you see?

A Poem by yashmita13

have you ever seen me cry?
have you ever heard me quit?
and then you say your life is sad.

you say you were embarrassed
but I've been through it worse

you say you got teased
but isn't that what you do with me?

you say that you have problems
but baby cant ever you see...?



© 2015 yashmita13



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People see what they need. I like the questions asked in the poetry. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

1 Year Ago

thank you..
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
Thanks for sharing. I see someone isn't living up to your standards. I had to read it twice to find the tone, because the third line threw me; but I get it now.

Posted 2 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a simple but profound poem of the unfair stages of life. We live in a sad quest of solitude. No one knows the truth of our center.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

2 Years Ago

awhh thanks
Matthew Ginn

2 Years Ago

besides my unnecessary need for symbolism. Your just a great writer.

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