she jumped with me

she jumped with me

A Poem by yashmita13

She asked me why I was doing this.

She asked me if I had decided to do this for sure.

I saw her eyes not believing it.

But I was going to do this anyway.

I had to.

So I told her to come with me-no questions asked.

And she did.

But her face was puzzled.

She seemed to not understand.

My reasoning.

My will.

I could almost sense the tension build.

I wanted her to see what I had seen.

To understand what I did.

But when I tried to explain it, it just couldn’t come out of my lips.

What would I have said?

What would I have explained?

I had nothing with me yet so much in my mind.

But if I did explain.

If I did tell.

She wouldn’t have been able to live the way I wish I had.

So I held her hand,

And jumped

© 2015 yashmita13


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such hidden story with disclosed truths

Posted 8 Years Ago


yashmita13

8 Years Ago

thanks :)
I enjoyed the story in the poetry. The gentle questions leading to very good ending. I liked ending. Left vision and thoughts/questions for the readers. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

8 Years Ago

thanks :)
im glad you liked it
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
Beautifully captured the whole situation.
Yes many thing was in mind but how could explain the moment.
She was puzzled but not leave him and she jumped with him.
it is great one friend.
So sensitive and emotional.

Posted 8 Years Ago


yashmita13

8 Years Ago

She jumped with her*
Since I meant me. N I'm a girl
Saddam

8 Years Ago

Yes, you are.
You are girl and you know it best.
This is a very emotional part of your life coming out from within. I think you have managed to pen it beautifully. I like the title "she jumped with me" it justifies your poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yashmita13

8 Years Ago

I'm glad it did. Thank u so much
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

Welcome friend

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