Blast Off

Blast Off

A Poem by john l smith
"

intergalactic transportation

"

 

Mariux 3 climbed the volcano

And it was really tall

So high into the clouds

She hoped she wouldn’t fall

 

She took off her clothes

And danced around the peak      

And if the clouds did part

We’d see a dancing freak

 

Cause she had three legs

And four longish arms

And five big red eyes

Added to her charms

She was from a different planet

And had fallen down to earth

And left a huge dent in the ground

Because of her great girth

 

To get back to her space again

She would need a serious boost

And to sit upon that volcano’s peak

Was what she had deduced

 

When that volcano did erupt

And sent her into outer space

She was sure she would come back

because Earth was such a lovely place


 

 

© 2019 john l smith


Author's Note

john l smith
NASA may have helped

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Holy cow! I wish I had some of what you're smokin'! This is so imaginative, I'm downright jealous! I love all your usual sassy touches, but especially the conceptual genius of needing a boost & getting a volcano enema to get things rolling *wink! wink!* Reading you helps keep my freak flag far-out (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


john l smith

5 Years Ago

Thanks Margie
Perhaps a bit of an aromatic send off but an alien has to do what a alien has t.. read more
Great poem Dave, made me chuckle.

Posted 5 Years Ago


john l smith

5 Years Ago

Thanks Dawn
Your lines reminded me of Sicily and when I walked on mount Etna, the ground beneath my feet warm from the lava spills. I can imagine this craft from outer space poised ready for blast off. Methinks though she would just have ended up earth bound. Boiled in lava flow. Very visual Dave.

All good wishes, Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


john l smith

5 Years Ago

4:45AM!! brutal!!
You are probably correct although the skin layer of the alien could be extr.. read more

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

163 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 24, 2019
Last Updated on January 24, 2019


Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Ego's Down Ego's Down

A Poem by Neville