Another 6 - word story

Only those who are lovers of Dr. Who will understand this.

I looked. I blinked. I died.

Author's Note

Picture taken from Google images.

Reviews

[David Jae]

I like what you've done. It sums up what you are trying to convey in a succinct and powerful manner.
However, it would have been nice if there was some character coming through in the story. That's just my personal opinion.

EG
"Get ready to run.' I say. 'Keep your eyes closed.'
"No! We'll get..."
"You can't help me, now. When it happened, go!"
I looked. I blinked. I died."

What I do like about this, however, is the fact that you understand that less is more. Many novice writers put in too much detail that buries their story. This is a hard lesson to learn and you should be proud of yourself.

David Jae

[Ice QueenJen]

Thanks for the comment David, but if you know anything about Dr. Who series I was referring to the stone Angels. Because you can't take your eyes off of them or you will die.

[David Jae]

I know about the Weeping Angel. And I apologise if I wasn't clear. There's nothing incorrect in your story, it just would have been nice to know more about the character. Characters are what bring stories alive. Who is this person? What are they doing?
That's my only criticism and it is a small one. You have a lot of potential and should be proud of what you've done.

[Ice QueenJen]

Here is a 6 word story just for you! "I read. I pondered. I thanked."
(by the way I just finished with the last episodes of Dr. Who - can't wait to see what happens next!)

[David Jae]

You have a talent for summing things up succinctly.

I sort of lost interest in Doctor Who after Matt Smith left. I miss David Tennant.

[Coyote Poetry]

You said everything in the six words. Very nice use of words dear friend.
Coyote