Twinned Souls

Twinned Souls

A Poem by Kimmee Jean
"

inspired from a line in a novel

"

The thread that connects my
life to yours is the string
of love, adoration, and trust
Our souls can be miles apart
but we are near always
Up to heaven and back
we are always intact to each
other. We will never lose
hope to show that we'll
cope with each other
We are twinned souls forever
together we will never be
lonely, even for a second
For I love you too much
for that type of Cruelty
We will be together forever
Forever



 

© 2008 Kimmee Jean


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The THREAD that connects my
life to yours is the string
of love, adorance, and trust
Our souls can be miles apart
but we are near always
UP TO heaven and back
we are always intact to each
other. We will never lose
hope to show that we'll
cope with each other
We are twinned souls forever
together we will never be
lonely, even for a second
For I love you too much
for that type of CRUELTY
We will be together forever
Forever



Also, instead of ADORANCE, I would replace word with ADORATION (I couldn't find the word ADORANCE in dictionary)......

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ignoring spelling mistakes, I enjoyed the feel and flow of this.....it sounds very prayer-like to me for some reason.....good stuff....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem. You may want to comb back over it, a few spelling mistakes, which distract a little from your writing. I feel the love in your words!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 13, 2008
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Kimmee Jean
Kimmee Jean

Overland, MO



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