happy

happy

A Poem by justink :):)

green grass

 

little babys

 

anw familys

 

no work

 

happy attitudes

 

respect

 

home

 

good food

 

grandmas choclate cake

 

um um um um um

© 2008 justink :):)


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Pj
How brilliant! So original and striking!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Yeah! Now I'm happy, too!

Thanks!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sweet! I loved the short and to the point meaning. What is better than chocolate cake and spending time with your family! Plus the fact that you don't have to work! This is my inspiration for the coming weekend! Great poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I had a dream one time almost just like this...everything shut down and people could spend time with their family--no work. Everything was the same as your poem...except I didn't get any of grandma's chocolate cake! I think I'll be dreaming of that tonight! hehe.
I really like your style here and this is wonderful!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Yes weekends and family gatherings are great.

You've done well! Good!

Posted 15 Years Ago


short and to the point!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its really quite nice..
Cute indeed :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha it's so sweet and cute. just fix the typos!!! sheesh it's so short you could do that :P babys = babies, chocolate, anw=and

:) but it made me smile. so thank you :)



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like i i think it is good

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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