Final Song

Dancing until the sweat pours

Arduous ears mixed with regret

Nameless music keys release sores

Carrying released scars for next set

Empty mind cannot forget

Reviews

[Traci]

Dancing is much like writing...good for the heart and soul. Excellent write, Jenn.

[justjenn_2u]

Ti Amo. Jenn

[timthy]

Felt it ...loved it..totally get it....your profile is as if you picked the words from my brain...a kindred spirit...I have a group page on FB called The poets Loft...check it out...look forward to reading more of your work.

[justjenn_2u]

Thanks Tim. I am kindred but numb. I appreciate your review.

[timthy]

may I share it on the loft

[justjenn_2u]

Yes, share away

[justjenn_2u]

It's not my best though

[Avinash]

Music can express unspeakable pains and so does your poem. Thanks for penning it.

[m.s.early]

We must have been to some of the same shows. Music is therapeutic for sure.
Great form and use of type face. Kudos.

[justjenn_2u]

I know I have seen you ; )

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

I like the last line best. I like the use of the font size as part of it. I am not sure about the "arduous ears" part, but I just may not honestly understand it.

[justjenn_2u]

Basically saying ears it's difficult for this girl to listen. It's toilsome. Glad you liked this. Just a few thoughts I had. : )

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Toilsome! Ah!! I get it. I always try to give my immediate and honest first opinion. It is worth a few good reads though!

[justjenn_2u]

Thanks again Robby. Word play is fun. : )

[Frieda P]

Oh good one jenn, I've done this dance, you never tend to forget those steps! Dancing whiplash from this one.............

[justjenn_2u]

I am glad you enjoyed. It was nice to wake up with dancing in my thoughts. When I dance, I can lose myself to everything around me.

[Frieda P]

Exactly, I feel the same way....was my pleasure!