Lost

Lost

A Poem by J.V. Stanley
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Harrishma rhyme

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Lost

November 12, 2011


Fear the guardian angel left your side

Remember still you need her most-

Raucous depravity, want from lies

Sentimental creature- time’s fabled ghost

Lining the hem of perpetual apprise

Gracious farewell of love’s gilded host


© 2011 J.V. Stanley



Author's Note

J.V. Stanley
Harrisham Rhyme is created by a female poet
named Harrisham Minhas, who is from the State of
Punjab in India.

Harrishma rhyme is a six-line rhyming stanza. In
this form, the last alphabet (letter) of the first
word of each line is the first alphabet (letter) of
the first word of next line. There is no restriction
on the starting alphabet (letter) of the first line.
Rhyme scheme : ababab.

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I love this poem, short sweet and to the point! I might have to give this for a try!

Posted 1 Year Ago
Beautiful. Powerful. Concise.

Posted 1 Year Ago
Ok, mistakes fixed, hopefully it doesn't suck

Posted 1 Year Ago
Uh...not to pop the bubble but line five???

Posted 1 Year Ago
i think i get it but why is the word nefarius the first line word instead of a word beginning with "s"?..im confused.

Posted 1 Year Ago
very well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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J.V. Stanley
J.V. Stanley

The Upper Peninsula of Michigan, MI



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My first of many books is currently available on Amazon. Fire and Water is a collaborative collection of poetry written by Aramey as well as myself. http://www.amazon.com/Fire-Water-Collaborative-.. more..

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