This is a Story of a Girl

This is a Story of a Girl

A Poem by Kelsey Desmond
"

She doesn't know, but I remember...

"

 She doesn't know why she keeps it.

She doesn't know why it's there.

She doesn't know how she got it,

And she doesn't know why she cares. 

 

But I remember the beauty,

That lay in her eyes,

As she sang her story,

Of  "Once Upon A Time..."

 

And I remember why she said it,

I remember the truth.

That she never let go,

As "Goodbye," we salute.

© 2009 Kelsey Desmond


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What a beautiful poem.
Not a poem cluttered with cliche phrases & the sort, but a genuine, stunning poem.
Truly, this is an amazing write.

Yours truly,
cloud6

Posted 14 Years Ago


Charmingly good,
Without a doubt, one of the best poems on this site.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is amazing!!!! I love the rhyme sceme, the emotion, and it flowed beautifully! Usually when people rhyme they just mess it up and it sounds forced but here it seems like you didnt even try.

Would you mind reviewing mine? I would appreciate it! great job anyway!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I wasn't expecting the ending, it was surprising in its bittersweet sadness. Very touching. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww. this a beautiful poem. it flows smoothly=)
-ruth

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well, you must like it more because this one was ment to b a poem. the other one (alone) was ment to be a song...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very Nice! I like this poem, even better than your ones. It flows well and great content, keep it up.


Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so wonderful, flowed so well, i like the meaning behind it as well



Posted 14 Years Ago


very nicely written, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 10, 2009
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Kelsey Desmond
Kelsey Desmond

Mandeville, LA



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Hey, dudes! Kelsey here! Sevies are awesome and I'm a proud thirteen-year-old! :) My posie's down in New Orleans, Louisiana! I love Musical Theatre (hehe NOCCA is amahzing!) Facebook and Gmail are my .. more..

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